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How many licks does it take? Just this one.
Raminar Dixon is a man that needs no introduction. His works will blow your mind -- they are truly like none other. This story is no exception -- Gender Swap Lollipop is the first part of a series which... well, features a lollipop that changes your gender. There were a few twists and turns that kept me surprised and interested. Every seed that was planted in the story was fully explored. Definately check this one out.
K**T
Catchy Title, Hot Sex, and a Catchy Title
This is a catchy title, isn't it? It pretty thoroughly sums up the plot, too. You have this slacker guy, Evan, who earns money by participating in clinical trials at the local pharmaceutical company. He is given a hormone therapy in lollipop form (why is the drug shaped like a lollipop, you ask? Because it rhymes) for testing of possible side-effects.[Unnecessary spoiler alert!]One major side effect that he notices right away is that it turns him into a girl. Not just any girl, but a very attractive and sexually uninhibited girl. Naturally, the only thing to do in this situation is masturbate with kitchen accessories and then have sex with the muscle-bound roommate.I hope I'm not being over sensitive here, but it seems odd that his becoming a girl should also coincide with becoming a sex maniac. One could argue that the Lollipop Guild slipped a little something extra in his hormone therapy and that's why he was suddenly so horny. I guess. To me it seemed to imply all women are secretly lusting for a big, strong man to throw us down and screw our brains out.Anyway, back to the story. There is some dramatic tension around the fact that even a "drop of semen" deposited in his (her) body will leave Evan unable to return to male form (what could semen possibly have to do with it, you ask? Do you really need to ask?) but generally the plot is on the thin side. The action, however, is quite hot and the writing style is engaging, with only a few phrases here and there that make you say whaaa?"The tingles had developed past the delicious buzz I had experienced the night before and shook me with a powerful surge of delight each time my finger graced the moistening recess."I like the idea of a guy getting to see life from the perspective of a girl. I give some credit for that. I mean, what a tremendous learning experience that would be! I just wish this particular guy could have learned something more than how to get laid.Rating: 3 1/2 starsRead Time: about 20 minutesViolence: NoSex: YesDrugs: Lollipops?
D**D
Not bad, might try more
Pretty decent gender swap story but I did have a few flaws with it. I like when either the transformation is instant or slow and somehow this story had the worst of both worlds. Slow in the areas I didn't like along with instantly skipping over the good bits. The other thing was how the drug effecting his mind was only mentioned once, but he had an instant attraction to his roommate before the drug would have had time to work. Still this story was free, the imagery was nice and the back story before the sexy parts were long enough to explain everything but short enough for me not to get impatient so yay. I might get the next one of these
J**R
Lollipop
In Gender Swap Lollipop is a very interesting read and what I liked about it was the the way they presented the story
K**K
Disgustingly naive
The author decides that someone who is attracted to women would suddenly like men if they turned into a woman. They also think that women's hair is naturally long. The author basically uses science as a substitute for magic, and assigns heteronormative standards to a story about sexual reassignment. Don't waste your time!
R**M
i can easily picture myself in the body of the main character ...
I found the story to be quite sexy and appealing, i can easily picture myself in the body of the main character as he undergoes such a tremendous physical change into womanhood. And the part where the roommate helps to break him in was quite arousing to be honest. The writer is very good at describing the process of transition and it flows quite naturally from start to finish. My only gripe is that this book was so short, i plan on purchasing the entire Gender Swap Lollipop Series ASAP!
K**E
Great, fun, hot read
A quick, fun little read, and very hot. Yes, the characters are flat and generic, the plot predictable, and the premise silly. But so what? That's not the point of the story. It delivered its intention: a hot sex scene. The first 5 stories are available in one collection, so you should buy that to save a little money. All stories well worth it. I hope they'll be more.
J**N
This is a little over the imagination. I can ...
This is a little over the imagination . I can believe the guy growing large breaststroke, although not over night I cannot believe that male genitalia can be changed to female w/of an operation. When or if that ever happens tell me. Then I will give this story 5 stars. Until then seeing is believing :)
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